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  posted by anotherJill

  I like the drawing part, mainly the bird.
  

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  posted by claybo

  For Peggy, whom I adore, a transcription:
  
  Analogs--they work like magiC
  And smiles/frowns are comic/tragiC
  Basically you find the elemenT
  Bust it--move it--make it eloquenT
  Sift till it is pure as pOI
  Swimming solidly like KOI
  Tarnish-proof it--buff it toO
  Tap it--zap it--make it coO
  Richochet it round The GardeN
  Raise some Cain and beg some PardoN
  Analog complete distillS
  All your thrills and spills and chillS
  
  

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  posted by pcalenda

  well I might if I could read it :(
  

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  posted by AristoPat42

  Differing (or deferring)
  magnified by one tiny element.
  Distillation an evasive carrot.
  Or so it feels to me.
  Gary, you make me use brain cells that have never nudged the light of thought. Of course you can tell that can't you. :^O Thanks!
  

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