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Point of View
Any incites out there on Point of View? Which do you prefer and why? When you sit down to write to you just naturally fall into your favorite form - or do you make it a deliberate choice before writing? Augh. Stuck on a story where I seem to have mixed a POV from first person to third person. Rookie.
CH One from Suite Lady J
Chapter One Untitled - hom2vt
posted by SuiteLadyJ
Hi - I read this from the files - I realize that it was posted over a year ago - and I wonder if you are still writing it? I liked the father character and the way you wrote about his care/love for his dog brought us to see him in more dimension. Very clever. The son at the door step was a suprise and I read through it very quickly wanting to see who the intruder was. Good suspense. I like beginning with action, it pulled me in very quickly. Have you written more that you would like to share?
Thanks -
Deborah
posted by SuiteLadyJ
Hi - I read this from the files - I realize that it was posted over a year ago - and I wonder if you are still writing it? I liked the father character and the way you wrote about his care/love for his dog brought us to see him in more dimension. Very clever. The son at the door step was a suprise and I read through it very quickly wanting to see who the intruder was. Good suspense. I like beginning with action, it pulled me in very quickly. Have you written more that you would like to share?
Thanks -
Deborah
And you think you are Jinxed?
Seriously, please tell me you wrote more of this - it has a very humorous edge and so much potential - please do share if you wrote more! Great story line.
Deboran
Deboran
Skimming the Surface
Hi - I just joined and I am reading through all of the files posted. I just wanted to comment on how I thought the first chapter of "Skimming the Surface" was really well written and that I'd love to read more. The setting was vividly set and I could imagine I was there.
Thanks,
Deborah
Thanks,
Deborah
