Message 168 of 2202

Nautillus Love ( The Poem)



Sorry about the double post) ( Image fort Poem is in Previous Post)

Poem is for two Friends Joy and Michael at Mindsay

Paper thin
Like an intricate
Pearl chambered heart
Your love grows stronger
as you move within..

Guided about with delicate breaths
in the pressures of deep seas.

I do not have to dissect the shell
to see that what you have is many chambered
and intricate
and something to be thankful for

a tiny form
with the swirl of a galaxy
held deep within.

May Blessings fill your lives.

photo of eyesthefuture
This is beautiful and a testament to what kind of friend you can be, not only recognizing but paying tribute to someone else's success at love.

"a tiny form
with the swirl of a galaxy
held deep within.."

i have a fondness for microcosm/macrocosm imagery so this particularly touches my heart. Our very cells are like tiny solar systems.

photo of feywon

about 1 month ago
Eyes! This is beautiful!
I could picture the "galaxy held deep within" in this love story.
I loved it!
photo of hobbit53

about 1 month ago