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Raechels Voice First Time on the Phone

This is a Haiku I wrote On Hearing My Grandaughters Voice First Time on the Phone

From October 2006

Cooing, like rainfall

To a parched,arid old man.

Spring alive, renewed.
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Well done- your haiku carries the refreshment of that sweet voice, thank you for it.
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2 months ago
Wonderful imagery!

CiaoMeOWwwwwww!! S,BQ
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2 months ago
This is so swee.t, Eyes! I can tell how much you love her
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2 months ago
Spring alive, yes! The image of rain falling in the coo of a sweet, soft voice is so lovely, and well in keeping with the bond you share with your tiny female namesake.
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2 months ago
Lovely, tender.
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2 months ago
Sweet perfection captured. I know this feeling.
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2 months ago