Message 226 of 2206

Brand new, may revise yet

Mixed Blessings

Feelings stirred in cyberspace
for good or ill, t'is fact
the time and distance gap
reminds me: think before react

If only t'was as easy to ignore
'real life' difficult folks
like those who hide hostility
behind a veil of 'jokes'

At times i ache in empathy
when another's life is tough
And then words seem to fail me
they simply aren't enough

My soul longs to reach
across both time and space
to firmly hug a shoulder or
gently touch a face

To 'be there' can be
proof, at least, of caring
to sit in patient silence
with a friend: Sharing.

© ebarmore 7/6/08

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It's lovely, and so REAL. Sometimes words from cyberspace seem more real to me than ones I hear in the space around me . . . but that's another story! Nice one, feywon
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2 months ago
You have expressed it so well, feywon. Thanks!
Words do fail us all at times. As writers, that can be frustrating.
As for revising, lordie, I never stop revising. My poetry and my paintings are never finished.

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2 months ago
ain't that the TRUTH! --PJ
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2 months ago
I know just how you feel ...wanting to reach out and help
Just that you want to is the gift, Feywon.
To revise or not to revise
That is the question
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2 months ago
Very nice poem Thank You
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2 months ago
Lovely thoughts and feelings. Someone once told me that when we live we draw circles around our families and love and protect that circle, but a true loving human makes his circles large to engulf all of mankind. I suspect you are a true loving human being.
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2 months ago