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Today

have caused someone great pain today
It wasn't supposed to happen this way
He said he didn't love me anymore
And Killed the love I had for him
I have caused someone great pain today
When I said I was determined to leave
He cried, I cried
He asked me why
I caused someone great pain today
I said he killed my love
He said "How can I get it back"
I said"There is no way"
I caused someone great pain today
The daily snipes, the daily fights
Killed the love I had
He said hurt him too at those times
But it was self preservation for me
I caused someone great pain today
I cannot find the passion again
He wanted to try again and I can't
He cried, I cried
I caused someone great pain today
And will forever live with the guilt

posted by Cookieblue

This is so sad but I imagine many will be able to relate to it.
You wrote this will great emotion and it can be felt with each word.
Thank you for sharing.
Sandy

posted by sandrajo
3 months ago

That was Heavy... I never know what I am going to find when I read you. But I always know it will be heart felt..

posted by onetoejeff
3 months ago

That is deep Cookie I can relate to this one.Good job...

posted by nanakim560
3 months ago

May you find a way to ease the pain

posted by Sarita05
3 months ago

Thank you all for your comments and support

posted by Cookieblue
3 months ago

oh my god im crying ihe caused me great pain, and i served it back its been a year and a half when does the great pain stop?

absolutely excellent prose.

posted by granmadonna
3 months ago

granmadonna I don't know that it ever will, this is to new to me and I'm the one ending things

posted by Cookieblue
3 months ago

With growth there is always pain, sadness of leaving the old out grown things behind.
Yet if we are to grow and and reach our potential, we leave waste and pain in our wake. Love and Peace dearheart.

posted by ladyhawk8141
3 months ago

ty ladyhawk for the wise word of encouragement

posted by Cookieblue
3 months ago

Yes Cookie I know how you feels.
I remarried my first wife.
6 years back.

She insisted things would improve after the ceremony.
She was just as rude and became worse.
Moved out 17 months back to a rented house.

I realized, we have to love ourselves and set our limits.
Daily fights and snipes erode our love
Pampering and loving them more makes it worse.

Realized I was rewarding her bad behavior.
Teaching her It is OK to be rude.
The fault was MINE.

I loved the wrong person.
Should have pampered and protected me.
And - Loved ME.