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Thoughts on Patrol

alkaline taste from a canteen,
a enemy that goes unseen,
breath sucking heat,
blisters on my feet.

Villages of hollow stares,
living in daily nightmares,
knowing you are hated,
worried about being crated.

bone drenching rain,
mosquitoes until insane,
Nights of quietness,
explosions of brightness.

never found lost friends,
new faces innocent grins,
another day on the trail,
one step from gates of hell.

old photos held tight,
peering into a jungle night,
talking to the supreme being,
questioning and disbelieving.

letters from home,
loved one left alone,
an infant never seen,
must keep weapon clean

being lifted by the bird,
remembering her last word,
hoping that it will end,
going out doing it again

By
© Easy-LSM

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Easy, I am glad you are getting these vivid memories out of you! You, my friend, have a way with words.

new faces innocent grins----conjures up all kinds of emotions. Pity for the innocence they will soon lose as well as their lives, perhaps. Heartbreak for your lost innocence. Anger at the thought you were as naive as they.

And, my friend, this is but ONE line in this amazing poem! I could write praises about every single line! I do believe this is my favorite poem! WOW!
Joyce
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3 months ago
My heart rips for your pain.
But this poem is to be cherished.Facing your "thoughts" and capturing them in this is a powerful way to manage your patrol!
Awesome!
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3 months ago
hobbit used the same word that sprung to my mind: powerful!
There is a stream of consciousness feel with thoughts jumping from the reality of the war to memories/thoughts of home and loved ones.

"hoping that it will end,
going out doing it again"

Those final lines speak volumes about fulfillment of duty.

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3 months ago
You always put such pictures in my brain. Pictures of things I will never know. I am grateful that you can do this. You have seen much my friend and felt more than most of us ever will.
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3 months ago
Easy, As I read this poem, my heart hurt, but I had hope. It was very special, it was very memorable, and it was very touching. It was if you somehow gathered thoughts from experienced soldiers, and spoke for them. Or....maybe from experience you spoke. Either way, I love the rhythmic flow of this piece, and with your permission, I would like to forward it to my military friends who are active duty. Please send me a msg of your preference. But most of all, thank you for this patriotic poem that touched so many hearts.
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3 months ago