Message 222 of 1984

Days: An Acrostic Sestina

Some days are harsh and they impose a fine
And then you find another wrinkle on
The Wrinkle Network. Others have a way
Unmitigated-gallingly, to tell
Right off: your plans are Doomed, and you must set
Neglected issues straight, before the game.

Most days will be a mixed bag—some fair game,
In random happenstance, from rank to fine.
Risk: Showing what you want before you’re set,
It may become elusive. Soldier on,
Anticipate, search faces for a tell,
Make Nice, make Hay, and you will find your way.

But then there’re days that pave a Golden Way
Up-tempo, you’re made Master of the Game,
Delighting with what faery stories tell
Delivering a Heart’s Desire so fine
Huge Grin displays you’ve got it going on,
As such you wish for more—a Pair, a Set.

Fate intervenes some days and they are set
As turning points, diversions of the way.
There may be Death involved. To carry on
It pays to make your peace. Part of that game
May alchemize relations far from fine
And it may heal them up—but time will tell.

Mayday! Emergent? Panic? Try to tell
Emergencies from Chicken Little’s set
Routine and make the panicker feel fine
Light-heartedness may transfer. There’s a way
If dire or not, to make a scene a game
None feel excluded from, nor feel put on.

May THIS day bring you what you’re dreaming on
Omitting nothing you would like to tell
Replete with fun and pure Love of the Game
Good-Magic-laden when its sun has set
And may some kindred spirits on your way
Nest hands in yours in moments truly fine

JOY gives a fine substrate to conjure on.
Of course a way exists for you to tell,
But that’s for you to set. ON with The Game!

Copyright © 2008 Gary Bowers

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wow gary..this is fine..this is more than fine...What a message here..Well done!!
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2 months ago
So many feelings and thoughts in this piece. You sum up most of the days and months we all have. But there is hope and joy too.
Nice work, I really enjoyed it.
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2 months ago
Incredible. Yes, 'truly fine' indeed. A study for any student of poetic form. Why would I need a book, I've only to study your poetry. With your sestina I've learned about the "retrogradatio cruciata" as well, and I'm once again dumb-founded by your expertise. What can I say - in the face of your talent and skill, I'm wordless!
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2 months ago
This poem is wonderful on so many levels...grabbing me hard with a line like: "There’s a way...If dire or not, to make a scene a game." Yes, I say, to the wise counsel and philosophy, and how perfect to give it to Merlin to deliver! You are such a wonderful weaver and solver of puzzles, dancing with seeming effortlessness through this complex structure, delivering a message that is both accessible and true. I loved it!
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2 months ago