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Low Tide

"Low Tide"

The pungent smell is not for all.
For me, a rich aroma comes.
It hints subtly of mortality,
A fact not faced easily.

Oysters revealed, spritzing,
Muddy sand exposed to see.
Here not to dust the dead return,
But to watery Mother Earth, Nature's urn.

Seashells and other flotsam
Grind to grains tiny of sand.
Once God's creatures living life,
Return to the raw, no more strife.

A reminder then of the future,
The same for all, man and beast.
Dust for some, others scattered at sea,
That's what I hope for me.

.....But not too soon!
gorillagaurd's profile
You enjoy and appreciate nature, it is clear. Fine stroll you take us on!
claybo's profile

over 2 years ago
good to see a post from you, gg! I love the low tides on SoCal beaches this time of year . . . the lowest tides come now and some pretty amazing sculpting is done, especially when combined with storms . . . lots of tidepools and much to see and smell and feel . . . you bring it all to me with your words
windnsea's profile

over 2 years ago
i don't mind that smell at all...that was a fine picture, good to hear from you!
Pajarito's profile

over 2 years ago
That was great gg. Your writing brought me back to the unmistakable smell of the salt air in Maine where I've spent so many wonderful vacation times....haven't found that same smell anywhere along the various coasts at all. Thank you.

I do have to comment tho in noticing that with Windnsea it brought the low tides of SoCal to mind. Pretty interesting how the same words "conjure" up, totally different pictures to different people. It didn't make me think of SoCal beaches at all.....lol.....a beautiful picture to us all I'm sure.
PhilomenaBanter's profile

over 2 years ago
It is very low tide here...strange when we have had such enormous ones of late...and have so much water laying everywhere from rain. It is very elemental in the smell, very basic....
The rhythm in this poem is captivating, thanks
hobbit53's profile

over 2 years ago

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