Message 2906 of 6476

The Wrong-Choice Cabinet

screwed up again we say
and another acknowledgment of failure
clings to the brain stem
with either suckers milkmaid hands or claws
depending
like red chiles on display at the supermercado
they hang tenaciously
and like thighdeep water to a sprinter
they impede
concentrate and teleport them
into a cabinet you don't use
promise them later review
shut and lock the cabinet
and bring a flashlight and open it just a crack
every six months or so
if they are not shrinking or gone
you need help
find a friend
but never
NEVER
let them back on
claybo's profile
"posted by claybo 29 minutes from now" . . . .

well, I need the extra time to read it again . . .
windnsea's profile

over 2 years ago
Maybe your computer's clock is wonky?

I really do know how to spell chili--had a Senior Moment . . .
claybo's profile

over 2 years ago
Always thought provoking, claybo.
Crindaguitar's profile

over 2 years ago
i love this look into what we do, have to do, should do...put those thoughts away and stop bashing ourselves.
I like "find a friend,
but never, NEVER let them back on"
yup
hobbit53's profile

over 2 years ago
well, here's the thing. I don't know why "they (eons)" changed it, but instead of saying a message was posted so many minutes ago, now it's the countdown minutes (29 from now, then 28 from now) until the hours begin to be counted, one hour ago, etc. weird. I kinda like it though . . . sort of etherly . . .

this poem is so 'the-way-it-is' if we're lucky enough to have that cabinet and know how to get stuff in it, and close it, and even lock it. the scary part is peeking back in later - I really like to keep it closed, just a slot for slipping new stuff in and never, ever, open it, even a crack. but alas, it only holds so much, so eventually . . .

another remarkable poem full of real stuff delivered in a fascinating package . . .
windnsea's profile

over 2 years ago
chili? I thought it WAS chile . . .
windnsea's profile

over 2 years ago
I never have enough of those cabinets. Happy Thanksgiving Claybo.
desertshaman's profile

over 2 years ago

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