These Days: Two For the Road

Message 2946 of 6472

I thought I saw it running up ahead
but then it turned and rushed by instead
I strained to catch it as it fled
I've been trying since I rose from bed

It's irking me half to death
I just cant seem to catch my breath
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Tide's up.
Southerly winds prevail
Rolling the bay up and over the roads
Flow on
Autumn changes never fail.
Sighing days wander down earth's abodes
Ebb now.
Sunset rests in the water
Driving slowly into it, crossing over

bmills
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posted by hobbit53

Nice :-) They both convey the same overall feeling, but in a different way.

posted by Crindaguitar
over 2 years ago

I really enjoyed your writes The first on has such great rhyme and it flowed so well. And it was a interesting piece of work. LISA

posted by esroddo
over 2 years ago

delightful flashes of your day - wow - your tide is sure frisky, keeps you on your toes - or, . . uh, tires? at least I hope so . . . I know you're careful, right? . . . thanks for the peeks . . .