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creature comfort . . .

seeking out the evening meal . . . the sunset . . . the walk
the bedding down . . . until . . . midnight . . . or . . .

the memories are so sharp sometimes . . .

I suppose it was an area set apart where lawn chairs
might have been stored although I don’t remember any -
an empty sandy box confined by open lattice panels
not solid enough to keep out the light misty rain
falling on us anyway in the shelter we’d taken

it was our habit to retire each evening after having
food and drink approximating an evening meal
to cuddle close and find solace in closeness
nothing more. just the simple chance to blend into another
meant survival sustenance to each

hard unforgiving ground was a luxury as it afforded
a time for stretching then spooning holding breathing
idle exchanges or no talk at all
bundled-extra-clothing-pillow talk . . . body warmth under
a private hidden night sky devoid of stress

a blanket of soft dark marine layer hiding us from all
our struggles and sins. peace and quiet laden -
we would have lain till midnight under the dampfall
had it not been for the flashing light of the foot patrol
scraping swinging over the sidewalk and bowling green

sudden haste and scrambling to the feet gathering packing
quickly moving on. memory is not sure where
we wandered off to that night - homeless each with a home
a door to enter . . . separate beds under other roofs to which
each would return at the Strike of Midnight

perhaps we only sat huddled-wrapped tightly together
pretzeled in the car seat or on a bench . . . against a palm
but I do know the clock eventually Did Its Duty until
the morrow’s cycle when once again we would be meeting
at our home by the sea . . .

I yearn still for that creature comfort

2009 Aug 3 11:11pm windnsea
windnsea's profile
...thanks for that wonderful portrait.....I like the feel of the words in my mouth as I read the piece and said it out loud....and yes to the exploration of yearning.....and the bodies feeding the bodies... with whatever it is that passes from one to another....that exchange....and the contrast between unforgiving ground and the giving/receiving of closeness...breath...
nicky1927's profile

28 days ago
oh my and yes and yes
G...you surely struck a chord...i so wanted to remember those times that have stayed subdued too long.
I love to remember my own "private hidden night sky devoid of stress..."
hobbit53's profile

28 days ago
..those adventurous times, weren't they wonderful! hugs, PJ
Pajarito's profile

27 days ago
Fantastic piece windsea. You've invited us into an intimate setting so perfectly.
Crindaguitar's profile

27 days ago