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Fill Me Up

There’s a distant call from yonder
Mountains valleys and hills
Thick layers of mist
Cloaked with prickly thorns

There is a closer call:
Untangle my feathers
Pierce my rocky skin
Smooth my brow of pain

Come closer
Awaken my battered heart of stone
Inject me
purge me
restore me

Then fill me up
With your love

wuc
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posted by wakeupcall
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"Come closer/Awaken my battered heart of stone..." This is a powerful invocation. Well done!
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posted by joanielind
16 days ago
very beautiful and as joanie has told powerful, very nice write!!
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posted by ArenaGina
15 days ago
Great work. It pulls you right into it.
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posted by SaltFlatt
15 days ago
I love your use of nature in this piece it gifts a wonderful lovely rich quality amid the longing …I love that you gift credence to the very essence of wanting…to voice that craving in such a strong way the intensity cries out to the reader as you words pour out on the page a very lovely work my heartfelt thank you for I enjoyed reading this work very much indeed…very lovely.

Lady E
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posted by LadyElbereth
5 days ago
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