I think you started in a good place. It's interesting.
Thanks Toot... when I have time I'll pursue it.
Don't let it wait too long, you can lose any momentum. Remember, anything can be fixed in the rewrites.
waking hours she’s compelled to relive the nightmare’s horror, . . . . Every night she tries to stay awake as long as possible, fearing sleep,
Your Question? Where to start the story - your intro works for me.
CJ
Yeah, I think it's nearly the perfect intro. I always find that the hardest part.