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HELP PLEASE

THIS IS A PRELUDE OF A BOOK I WANT TO WRITE. PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR COMMENTS ABOUT IT.
MizKat's profile
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I think you started in a good place. It's interesting.
tootall1121's profile

5 months ago
Thanks Toot... when I have time I'll pursue it.
MizKat's profile

4 months ago
Don't let it wait too long, you can lose any momentum. Remember, anything can be fixed in the rewrites.
tootall1121's profile

4 months ago
waking hours she’s compelled to relive the nightmare’s horror, . . . . Every night she tries to stay awake as long as possible, fearing sleep,

Your Question? Where to start the story - your intro works for me.
CJ
ChateauJoinsard's profile

4 months ago
Yeah, I think it's nearly the perfect intro. I always find that the hardest part.
tootall1121's profile

4 months ago
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