After reflecting on John, the author of Revelations, picture of heaven, I thought, "God is no respector of gold, rubies, diamonds, or precious stones, so why would he make heaven that way?" Then I realized that John was trying to portray heaven in a way that man would want it more. Or a way that would make it more appealing. Understanding mans greed I understood. But it made me sit down and write what my Idea of heaven would be.
As you reach the bottom of the trail coming from the great snow covered mountain, you see a sign that reads, "EDEN". No population numbers on the little sign. But even from here you can hear waterfalls, birds singing, and other animals calling out their continment of being in the valley. If you look up at the sky you see no clouds, no sign of polution, just birds of every species calling to the other creatures anouncing your homecoming.
The path into Eden is winding but beautiful. A little stream winds beside the path and wild flowers stand proud everywhere, visited by bees and butterflies. As you walk, rabbits, deer, racoons, squirrel's, and other creatures join your walk, chattering their love for you. Up ahead the lioness and her cub stand up, yawn and stretch, and come join also.
Then the path takes you through a forest, but it's not like most forests, because no trees have been cut, no sign of wild fires have raged through carrying destruction and death to the creatures living there. Some of the trees are thousands of years old and some are young saplings. Even the palm grows by the willow. The scent of pine fills the air.
Then the path leaves the forest and you enter a great grass covered valley filled with deer, buffalo and all sorts of horses and grazers. The stream splits and gives birth to another and they race on to feed the wheat fields that are shoulder high and weaving to the cool breeze. Soon you see the waterfalls, and the clear pool, and your heart races because you know you're almost home. You see the old vineyard and notice that grapes are as big as baseballs, and none have fallen to the ground, and all are ripe. Creatures are running from everywhere to greet you.
Then, you turn the bend in the path and you see it. The old homeplace from your childhood. Two old men are on the porch and when they see you, they call into the house and people come running out. You see everyone who's gone on before you. They hug you and kiss you. The homecoming is great. You notice that no one cries. You see that aunt Mary who had the bent and disfigured hands now has perfect bones. Grandma doesn't wear glasses anymore. And there's little Bobby, no longer sickly. Good fiends that had passed are there also. There's nothing but happiness in your heart.
After everything calms down, you ask, "do we all live in this cabin?" They reply, "no son, yours is just down the path. We just came to meet you here. Why don't you go see your new home. We'll be here any time you want to see us." You bid farewell and walk on.
The path starts to climb and you look back and you can see the cabin you just left and the two old men are back to sitting on the porch. Bobby is playing with a newborn fawn. As you follow the gently climbing path you reach a flat and perfectly level meadow, covered with all types of flowers and herbs. You stop and look out over the valley and the streams. You see nothing but beauty. The happiness in your heart reminds you of a fireworks display at each new thing you look at. A bird comes and lands on your shoulder as a bobcat rubs against one leg and a fox against the other.
Then you turn and you see the little cabin. On the porch you see a swing. Planted around the entire cabin is every species of flower. The smell sets off more fireworks. Large shade trees give a cool feeling of perfect comfort. As you enter the cabin, a feeling of homecoming like you've never had sweeps over you. You look around and there are all of your precious things you've lost over the years. The things lost in the fire as well. Over in the corner is your old guitar and you wonder! Bowls of fruit and good things to eat are everywhere. A vase of the most beautiful flowers on the table. Then you see a leaf lying on the handmade wooden table. You go over and pick it up thinking it had blown in but you see there is writing on it in the most perfect form.
"My dear son, I picked this fig leaf to write this message, because when I sent you out of Eden to learn the lessons of life, I covered you with it. You have done well and the sins you commited while in trial, have been wiped from all records and memory. The posessions from the fire is to show you that nothing is lost from God. Nothing forgotten. The old Telecaster guitar was one of the swords I gave you on earth to reach some of the lost of the world. And since I gave you a special gift, Play it for us often. Welcome home my son. And well done. I love you" It was not signed but there was no question whom had written it.
My Picture of Heaven
posted about 1 year ago, updated 12 minutes later
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- 1. about 1 year ago atomicvet wrote:
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beautiful, just beautiful!!!! i found myself walking aside the man on those paths.
- 2. about 1 year ago meowmom wrote:
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I love how you described heaven. God has really blessed you with the precious gift of writing and you use it so well to assist others on His path through your writing and comments. God bless you. Your friend, Lauren
- 3. about 1 year ago meowmom wrote:
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I love how you described heaven. God has really blessed you with the precious gift of writing and you use it so well to assist others on His path through your writing and comments. God bless you. Your friend, Lauren
- 4. about 1 year ago SweetMama66 wrote:
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May it be!! Why haven't you published?
- 5. about 1 year ago Starchaser wrote:
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Reading this today meant a lot to me and it brought tears to my eyes. My ex mother in law who I loved very much passed away on Wednesday and was buried yesterday. I love to think that she is now sitting in heaven surrounded by her sisters, mother and father and holding her son who passed away at the age of four many years ago... My daughter was very upset that her Granny was no longer with her. I told her she went home to be with Eddie; he had waited long enough to be held once again.. Thank you for writing this...
- 6. about 1 year ago quiteone wrote:
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Thank you This is really beautiful. I saw my family as I was reading this.
- 7. about 1 year ago wannabentenn wrote:
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You made me a believer! God Bless You. You are very special.
- 8. about 1 year ago FlowerGirl50 wrote:
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You see heaven as I also see it, but have God's gift of words to put on paper. You are truely blessed by our heavenly Father.
I loss my husband to cancer 4 yrs. ago and this is how he walked to met up with all of our loved ones that were waiting to welcome him home.
The only thing differt is there would be a small pond off to the side of the cabin. The last day that I had my lifemate, lover and friend with me here on this earth, he told me that he was fishing in God's golden pond. So when our heavenly Father calls me home I'll also see my loving family once more.
- 9. about 1 year ago Ivonne wrote:
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God Bless You! Your heaven description brought tears to my eyes. I just imagine my husband, who passed away 3 years ago, taking exactly that beautiful path. He loved flowers and every kind of bird. Seeing his mother, father, aunt and two of his brothers welcome him home. You know, I am sure he receive that same note in the wooden table, because he was a great men. His sins were wiped from all records and memory.
- 10. about 1 year ago mamanrse wrote:
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If only..I try to tell others less optimistic or faithful if you will, how that is how i see heaven,Why is it we can only believe the badthings that lay ahead for us ..old age,pain etc, but not the rewards not the promise of "thy kingdom come" I truly believe there comes a moment in our death where it all comes together all becomes clear & real & we reunite w/our loved ones who have gone before us,or else What's this all been for !,
- 11. about 1 year ago MatureMadama wrote:
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God bless you! Thank you for writing this, I was really spiritually reading it and it just makes me feel so close to God! I want to not forget to be good so I can someday go down that parth and see the glory of my God! It's hard to imagine this spiritually since we don't have the mind so intense like our Lord...my Lord is so great! God Bless You!
- 12. about 1 year ago Diannesw wrote:
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Your view of heaven is heavenly I have always seen it as something like this

